Thanks for proofreading this text in English =)

Question

May 08th Today is mother’s day. It is a special day for everyone. We use this day to honor our mothers all over the world. That’s why I decided to prepared a breakfast for my mom. I made his favorite food for breakfast. After that My family and I planned to go to a seafood restaurant and listen music there. My family that lives in downtown is coming for this special day. We are going to spend a wonderfull day. I really like this days because I can see almost all my family together.Moreover, I’ll call my family that lives in a foreign country to say happy mother’s day.

Pam, you M U S T use correct spelling , especially in the title, thanks - 00494d19, May 10, 2011

Answer 1

May 08th Today is Mother's Day. It is a special day for everyone. We use this day to honor our mothers all over the world. That’s why I decided to prepared a breakfast for my mom. I made hisher favorite food for breakfast. After that my family and I planned to go to a seafood restaurant and listen music there. My family that lives in downtown is coming for this special day. We are going to spend a wonderfull day. I really like this days because I can see almost all my family together.Moreover, I’ll call my family that lives in a foreign country to say happy Mother's Day.

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Good job Pamech.

I would suggest something change in one sentence.

We are going to spend a wonderful day.

I would suggest that we are going to spend a wonderful day together, except you use the word "together" in the next sentence.

You might say, "We are going to have a wonderful day. That expression sounds OK without adding "together" at the end.

Or you might say, "We are going to spend a wonderful day with each other."

Answer 2

May 08th Today is Mother's Day. It is a special day for everyone. We use this day to honor our mothers all over the world. That’s why I decided to prepare a breakfast for my mom. I made her favorite food for breakfast. After that my family and I planned to go to a seafood restaurant and listen music there. My family who live downtown are coming for this special day. We are going to (May I sugest "have" here?)a wonderfull day. I really like these days because I can see almost all my family together.Moreover, I’ll call my family that live in a foreign country to say happy Mother's Day.

Good Job!

Answer 3

May 8th: Today is Mother’s Day. It is a special day for everyone. We use this day to honor our mothers all over the world. That’s why I am going to prepare a breakfast for my Mom. I will make **her favorite food for breakfast. After that my family and I plan to go to a seafood restaurant and listen to music there. My family that lives downtown is coming over for this special day. We are going to spend a wonderful day. I really like this day because I can see almost all my family together.Moreover, I’ll call my family who lives in a foreign country to say**, " Happy Mother’s Day!"**

Great job, Pamech. I changed it like it was on May 8th. You certainly can use it any way you like. - sanlee, May 10, 2011