English homework
I've already sent one paragraph from my story, and it has been marked, thank you very much again ! I have the next one 
-Please stop, my little baby is sleeping and she hasn't slept for so long, it's hard to put her to sleep- said a woman that was sitting right next to her, with the baby on her lap. It didn't work - the laughing woman gave us all an asking look and kept on roaring with laugher. - Please shut up or I will go for security - a sturdy man said irritably. -She must be mental - I heard from somewhere behind me. The baby girl was finally awaken and began to sob her eyes out. Her mother was looking desperately for any help. An old, frail man stood up, put his hand on the laughing woman's arm and, pushing her gently forwards, whispered to her : ,,Please go outside with me, don't resist, you are disturbing''. She smiled at him, stood up and left the room, hopping. I forgot about this bizarre person as quickly as she disappeared. Next day I was going down a deserted street. Nobody was there, what put me into good mood as I always enjoy moments of silence when nobody observes me in secret. This absence of people to keep me company didn't last long. Turning the corner, I almost knocked down a tall woman. I raised my head to say my sorry and immediately recognized her. I met the woman that laughed at the bus station. I made some pathetic, involuntary movements, daggered and, completely bewildered, spun around to make my way back home. -Is she alright? - I heard from her. -Who are you asking for? - I replied. -The girl I made cry yesterday. -I don't know her. -Of course you don't, do you? That would be funny! You know the girl! And she did it again - laughed out loud, rolling her eyes and covering mouth with both her hands. I turned around and broke into run. She didn't do anything to stop me, only shouted out some incomprehensive words.
4 Answers
Interesting story
-"Please stop, my little baby is sleeping and she hasn't slept for so long, it's hard to put her to sleep" said a woman that was sitting right next to her with the baby on her lap. It didn't work - the laughing woman gave us all a beseeching look and kept on roaring with laugher.
"Please shut up or I will go for security" a sturdy man said irritably.
"She must be mental" I heard from somewhere behind me. The baby girl was finally awake and began to sob. Her mother was looking desperately for any help. An old, frail man stood up, put his hand on the laughing woman's arm and, pushing her gently forwards, whispered to her.
"Please go outside with me, don't resist, you are disturbing us''. She smiled at him, stood up and left the room, hopping. I forgot about this bizarre person as quickly as she disappeared. The next day I was going down a deserted street. Nobody was there, which put me into good mood as I always enjoyed moments of silence when nobody observed me. This absence of people to keep me company didn't last long. Turning the corner, I almost knocked down a tall woman. I raised my head to apologize and immediately recognized her. It was the woman who laughed in the bus station. I made some pathetic, involuntary movements, staggered and, completely bewildered, spun around to make my way back home.
"Is she all right?" I heard from her.
"Who are you asking about?" I replied.
"The girl I made cry yesterday."
"I don't know her."
"Of course you don't, do you? That would be funny! You know the girl!" And she did it again--laughed out loud, rolling her eyes and covering her mouth with both her hands. I turned around and broke into a run. She didn't do anything to stop me, only shouted out some incoherent words.
Thanks. I see you are advanced, would you mind pointing out any horrible mistakes?
Thank you very much, really helpful
