Igual de severa
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Severa - severe.
Ella se quedo atrás , amargada
y me escribió, igual de severa
ella dijo: "En los días que eras
un pobre sin esperanzas
me gustabas mas .."
She was left behind, bitter (and a sigh)
and she wrote to me, (equally dour)
She said "In the days wen you were
poor without hope (hopelessly poor)
I like you more (I just liked you more)
Looks to be a brilliant translation. But I wonder about "igual de severa" and how it relates to "equally dour". Gracias. I think of dour as gloomy.
Gracias.
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updated May 7, 2011
posted by jeezzle
The Smiths! - galsally, May 7, 2011
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Jeezle, I'm not sure if what you have works, but a word I recently learned that I like for "gloomy" is "fúnebre." You may already know this word, just throwin' it out there.
updated May 7, 2011
posted by pescador1
