Please, could you tell me is it ok?
My writing is about the controversial topic: Women in Combat.
The question is: The women should be in the military service and still more, should they go to combat?
In my opinion all the young people should do the military service, because if they don´t, maybe lost their precious time until they decide what to do with their lives or they to finish in gangs. In the majority of cases are the parents who are very protective with their children and they prefer that don´t suffer, besides they think that a lot of evil thinks have been done by military forces. In the case of the women, actually she is as prepared as the man in all the cases, There are many people that not in favor of that women being in combat, however I think that women should be the military service and if it is necessary she can go to the combat, but If the woman can do all the things as well as a man, also I think that men and women are clearly different, she has skills should not be missed, for instance she is very good for communication service, and I would go even further, in combat she is very good in health service. Many people think women should not fight alongside men in combat, well neither do I. women can be in combat, but they will be better in other places.
In summary, women can developed as well as men, so no way is combat nonfeminine, basically, I am in favor of that and although men are stronger than women, women are better than men intellectually. Woman mus be prepared to help to husband and his country without forgetting that her main role is to be mother and wife.
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The question is: Should women be in the military service and what is more, should they go to combat?
In my opinion all the young people should do (no the) military service, because if they don´t, maybe they will lose their precious time before they decide what to do with their lives or they may end up in a gang. In the majority of cases it is the parents who are very protective with their children and they would **prefer that **they wouldn't suffer, besides they think that a lot of evil things have been done by military forces. In the case of the women, actually she is as prepared as ** much as a** man in any cases, There are many people that are not in favor of (no that) women being in combat, however I think that women should be in the military service and if it is necessary she can go to (no the) combat.If the woman can do all the things as well as a man, then I think that men and women are clearly different, women have skills that should be taken into account. For instance, women are very good for communication services, and I would go even further, in combat she is very good in health services. Many people think women should not fight alongside men in combat, well I do too. Women can be in combat, but they will be better in other places.
In summary, women can develope (no d) as well as men, so no way is combat non-feminine, basically, I am in favor of that and although men are stronger than women, women are better than men intellectually. Woman must be prepared to help her husband and his country without forgetting that her main role is to be mother and wife.
I'll simply say I support women being given the oppurtunity to serve if they want to... but on the other, my feelings get strong, and i'll refrain from speaking on it. 
