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Esto esta bien dicho?

Esto esta bien dicho?

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I wonder if tomorrow I can have a private reunion with Joy and you.

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updated May 5, 2011
posted by jbhsax

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I'm guessing you mean "meeting" instead of "reunion". You also might say "could" instead of "can" - it implies more of a request, though either is OK. Otherwise, well said.

("está" needs the tilde over the "a".)

updated May 5, 2011
edited by DR1960
posted by DR1960
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Reunion, in English, is used to convey the meaning of "coming together again" or a second or additional time. It is also used to mean a gathering of relatives or family or perhaps classmates or people with a past common interest.

May I suggest a better way to phrase your question might be:

"I wonder if tomorrow I can have a private reunion meeting with Joy and you you and Joy."

To say 'Joy and you' is not wrong, but, I am personally more comfortable with 'you and Joy'.

These are just some thoughts. Your suggestion is not wrong, but, I found it just a little awkward.

Saludos/Regards,

Moe

updated May 5, 2011
posted by Moe