Dance, Love, Sing, Live... Quote

Question

Can somebody help me make this quote more accurate? Thank you!!!

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Dance like no one is watching

Love like you'll never be hurt

Sing like no one is listening

Live like it's heaven on earth

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Baila como si nadie está mirando

Ama como si nunca se duele

Canta como si nadie está escuchando

Vivo como si fuera el cielo en la tierra

Answer 1

After the word "como si" there will always be a subjunctive form.

This is because "as if" is not a definite thing, it is saying it may or may not be that way.

Answer 2

Dance like no one is watching

Love like you'll never be hurt

Sing like no one is listening

Live like it's heaven on earth

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Baila como si nadie estuviera mirando

Ama como si nunca te hubieran herido

Canta como si nadie estuviera escuchando

Vive como si el cielo fuera la tierra

I suggest "Vive como si fuera la tierra el cielo" just to keep the rhyme.:) (It's a poem anyway) - Deanski, May 3, 2011