journals-can someone help me to correct them?plzz
April 13th
I had an exhausted day. I worked from 7am to 3pm. I made lost of documents and sent them to important companies. I addition, I had a meeting with my boss that took place in a restaurant that is near the company where I work. It took 3 hours. At 5pm I had to go English class. During the class the teacher told us that the next day we’ll have the midterm exam and he gave us a lot of homework. But, when I asked about our writings he said, he didn’t have enough time to correct them. So, we have to wait. As a consequence, I’m so nervous about my grades. Furthermore, this week I wasn’t felling ok and I don’t know why. I think I must go to see a doctor.
April 14th
Today is the midterm exam. I woke up at 7am; I just slept 4 hours because yesterday from 11pm to 3am I was studying with my friend Katty. We made a summary about the definitions we have in our book. In the morning I was studying by myself practicing and reading some articles that I found interesting on the internet. I saw a tutorial that shows me how to write a paragraph. For example, it gives you the tricky tings to do and the steps to follow to get a good paragraph. It helped me a lot. Well, now it is time to go to classes.
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I had an exhausting day. I worked from 7am to 3pm. I made lost of documents and sent them to important companies** this sentence is confusing, made lost of documents ... I'm not sure what you want to say). In addition, I had a meeting with my boss that took place in a restaurant which is near the company where I work. It took 3 hours. At 5pm I had to go to English class. During the class the teacher told us that the next day we’ll have the midterm exam and he gave us a lot of homework. But, when I asked about our essays he said, he didn’t have enough time to correct them. So, we have to wait. As a consequence, I’m really nervous about my grades. Furthermore, I wasn’t felling ok this week ** (sounds better here) and I don’t know why. I think I **should go to see a doctor.
April 14th
The midterm exam is today. I woke up at 7am; I just slept 4 hours because yesterday from 11pm to 3am I was studying with my friend Katty. We made a summary about the definitions we have in our book. In the morning I was studying by myself practicing and reading some articles that I found interesting on the internet. I saw a tutorial that shows me how to write a paragraph. For example, it gives you the tricky things to do and the steps to follow to get a good paragraph. It helped me a lot. Well, now it is time to go to class.
well done, they are really good
