Are these right??

Question

I have a project due in my spanish class can you tell me if these sentances in English and Spanish are correct? Every little part of them have to be right

I run in the park with my friend.-Cada día yo corro en el parque com mis amigos.

I write im my diary every night.-Yo escribo en mi diario cada noche.

My daughters are very smart. I am proud of them.- Mis hijas son inteligentes. Estoy orgullosa de ellas

The girl is very smart in spanish class.-La chica es muy inteligente en la clase de español.

The girl on the brown horse is jumping.-La chica en el caballo marrón está saltando.

My mom is drinking coffee withher breakfeast.-Mi madre está bebiendo el cáfe con su desayuno.

I have 4 dogs and 2 horses.-Yo tengo cuatro perros y dos caballos.

I am hot after running.-Yo tengo calot después de correr.

Thanks!!

Welcome to the forum! - pesta, Apr 8, 2011

When you use "tengo" you do not need the "Yo" - ian-hill, Apr 8, 2011

Sentences, with her breakfast, in my diary - aocroc, Apr 8, 2011

Switched category to "Proofreading" - DJ_Huero, Apr 8, 2011

Answer 1

Hello Rachel and Welcome to the Spanishdict forum

You said I run in the park with my friend.-Cada día yo corro en el parque com mis amigos.

I would say: Corro en el parque todos los diás con mi amigos = I run in the park every day with my friends ( o con mi amiga = with my(girl) friend)

You do not need to use personal pronouns in examples 1, 2 and 8 (final example)

My daughters are very smart. I am proud of them.- Mis hijas son muy inteligentes. Estoy orgullosa de ellas

You can use the word lista instead of inteligente to mean smart(clever) Mis hijas son muy listas

tengo calor in the last example I am sure the t is just a typo

I hope these suggestions help :-)

Muy bien Paul. :) - Dakie, Apr 8, 2011

Muchas Gracias, Dakie por el ánimo :) - FELIZ77, Apr 8, 2011

Answer 2

In the last two, instead of "Yo tengo" I would use just "Tengo". The subject pronoun in Spanish is redundant here.

... and same thing about "Yo escribo..." - pesta, Apr 8, 2011

Answer 3

This is the only error I can see:

I am hot after running. Should be: Tengo calor después de correr

typo...con mis amigos..... son "muy" intelegentes - 0074b507, Apr 8, 2011