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Una de las ventajas de legalizar la marihuana es que la policía puede comenzar a concentrarse en cosas más importantes, en lugar de dispensar multas a las personas que tienen unos pocos gramos en el bolsillo, y sería detener el engreso de los camellos, y también quitar su autoridad en las calles. En muchos lugares tiene que cuidar con vender marihuana, por que hay siempre alguien que es superior – así los camellos menores no venden la marihuana más bajo de ellos. Por eso disminuiría legalización de la murihuana la escena de las bandas en por ejemplo Nørrebro en Dinamarca. Muchas personas creen que legalización de la marihuana crearía un abuso entre los consumidores, pero la gente fuma marihuana lo que quieren. A causa de una legalización de la marihuana no significa que la gente que normalmente fuma marihuana fumaría mucho más.

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