Spanish paper, sixth paragraph
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Please proofread!
La honestidad de Ernesto es un rasgo admirable, sin embargo creo que debemos ser cautelosos a seguir en su franqueza ruda. Admiro su honestidad y sus intenciones amable. Quiero arrojar lejos de seguir el comportamiento de Alberto. Él hace todo para su propio beneficio personal. La única persona que realmente parece importarle es Ernesto. Sus objetivos suelen ser egoístas.
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updated Apr 7, 2011
edited by 00494d19
posted by sheepgirlhannah
Please post in the correct catergory, thanks - 00494d19, Apr 7, 2011
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"A seguir en su franqueza ruda" -> I don't understand this part. I understand the "Franqueza ruda", but the "seguir" doesn't makes sense…is this a translation form an English text?
If he has "intentions" (more than one) they are "amables", not "amable".
Then you use "seguir"again on the third sentence and I'm lost again.
Other than that it reads alright.
updated Apr 7, 2011
posted by sExxY_n1njA_69
