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Spanish paper, first paragraph

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Would appreciate any proofreading tips on this paragraph.

En la película “Diarios de motocicleta”, los mejores amigos Ernesto y Alberto viajan a través de América del Sur en una motocicleta para explorar el mundo. Largo de la película, Ernesto y Alberto tienen personalidades contrastantes. Ernesto es honesto, a veces brutalmente contundente, mientras que Albert se aprovecha de la gente. La honestidad de Ernesto es a veces contundente, incluso grosero. Pero Alberto miente a todo el mundo y menudo conseguir los dos amigos en problemas.

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updated Apr 7, 2011
posted by sheepgirlhannah
Hi Sheep there are parts I'm not sure what you mean - could you post the English? - margaretbl, Apr 4, 2011
Durante toda la película.., grosera, y a menudo consigue meter a los dos amigo... - margaretbl, Apr 7, 2011

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In the movie Diarios de motocicleta, best friends Ernesto and Alberto travel across South America on a motorcycle to explore the world. Throughout the movie, Ernesto and Alberto are contrasted. Ernesto is honest, sometimes brutally blunt, while Alberto takes advantage of people. Ernesto’s honesty is sometimes blunt, even rude. But Alberto lies to everyone, often getting both friends into trouble.

That's the first paragraph in English...hope that helps

updated Apr 4, 2011
posted by sheepgirlhannah