Can someone proff this business letter?? Thanks

Question

Debido a las recientes tormentas de graniso y daños del viento gue han surgido en su vencindad, muchos techos an sido affectados y muy probable, no se han dado de cuenta

Nosotros en Weather Shield Construction especialisamos en inspeccion de los techos. Nos aseguramos de gue el superficie del techo, tapajuntas, calafateo, y estancos esten sellados. Prestamos atención especial a las chimeneas, tuberías, y otros elementos que sobresalgan. Todo esto lo hacemos absolutamente GRATIS! Llame Ahora! 321-947-5344

Lo bueno es gue si encontramos algo grave en su techo o revestimiento, nosotros le ayudamos procesar la demanda al seguro por el dano causado. Usted le ha estado pagando al seguro todo este tiempo para gue cuando sucendan estas cosas se le paguen por la reparaciones o replaso.

Gracias!

Joe [e-mail]

By "proff" do you mean "proof" as in proofread? You still want it in Spanish, just make sure it's all correct? - cristalino, Mar 29, 2011

Good catch Thanks! - jamingjoe, Apr 3, 2011

Answer 1

This is just from a quick perusal: all your "gue"(s) need to be "que"(s)... I believe you need to switch tormentas and recientes so that it reads "tormentas recientes"... afectados and not affectados... han in place of an after "muchos techos"...dado la cuenta in place of "de cuenta" and a period to close...inspection has an accent mark on the "o" in Spanish... sorry just a few things I picked out after a cursory review....

Thank You! - jamingjoe, Apr 3, 2011

And thank you... wish I could have done more! Just a few things I noticed. :) - cristalino, Apr 3, 2011

Answer 2

Some misspelled words not mentioned:

1. granizo
2. vecindad
3. especializamos
4. estén
5. sucedan
6. daño

7. ¡Bienvenido al foro!

Welcome to the forum!

Q, which is heard or used more: vecindad or vecindario? - cristalino, Mar 29, 2011

Your #7 could be: remplazo en lugar de replaso? - cristalino, Mar 29, 2011

Vecindario, good point. Thanks! - jamingjoe, Apr 3, 2011

Answer 3

It goes something like this:

Due to recent storms and damage, debri from wind have caused many ceilings/ roofs to cave in. You are in an AFFECTED area and are very likely not have to have Weather Shield Construction. We specialize in inspections of the roofs. We ensure that the roof surface, flashings, and caulking are sealed watertight. We pay special attention to the vents, pipes, and other items that stand out. We do this absolutely FREE! Call Now! 321-947-5344 Another good thing is that if we find something serious in your roof or siding, we will help process the insurance claim for the damage caused. You've been paying this long to secure this ??when these things happen, that the repairs are paid for or replaced.

Thanks!

-- That's the gist of it!

He meant proofread as in check it over, not translate - someone09, Mar 29, 2011