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can you correct the sentences If I made a mistake :) please

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Well I think all of us have intuitions, but it depends if we really believe in that. Anywhere we go ,we will find problems like the article but you have to be carefull . Rarely do I do something like Donna and Carlos did.Because I had a bad experience, I am afraid to help unknown people. Unfortunately,there are some people that take advantage of your kindness and they roobbed you or steal you stuffs (TE ASALTAN) I DON’T KNOW how to sayt his . como se dice fui asaltada ? For instance let me give you an experience that I had I was going to go to the bank, so my mom told me that I had to be careful with the money .Because I was in hurry I didn’t listen to her. Before leaving I forgot to save the money in a safe place, when I left home I saw an old woman sitting on the floor ,and I asked if she needed some help and suddenly she stole my money . I sTarted to follow her but she was gone . It was an aweful experience ,however, I learned something after all of this Don’t trust in people that you really don’t know.

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updated Mar 22, 2011
posted by katita1992

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Alright, I corrected the paragraph(?) for you grin

Well I think all of us have intuitions, but it depends if we really believe in that. Anywhere we go ,we will find problems like the article but you have to be careful. Rarely do I do something like Donna and Carlos did.Because I had a bad experience, I am afraid to help unknown people. Unfortunately, there are some people that take advantage of your kindness and they rob you (TE ASALTAN) I DON’T KNOW how to say this. ¿Como se dice fui asaltada ? For instance let me give you an experience that I had I was going to go to the bank, so my mom told me that I had to be careful with the money. Because I was in hurry, I didn’t listen to her. Before leaving I forgot to put the money in a safe place, when I left home I saw an old woman sitting on the floor, and I asked if she needed some help and suddenly she stole my money. I started to follow her, but she was gone. It was an aweful experience, however, I learned something after all of this. Don’t put your trust in people that you really don’t know.

Hope this helped.

updated Mar 22, 2011
posted by unotom
Let me tell you an experience/ or give you an example ... - FELIZ77, Mar 22, 2011
Yeah, I just glanced over it, guess I missed that one >_> - unotom, Mar 22, 2011