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El camping Mediterráneo es uno tipico pueblo turistico en la costa mediterranea. El camping es famoso porque su ambiente agradable y tranquilo. Primero, el clima es cómodo porque es cerca del mar tampoco hace demasiado calor. Para que los clientes pueden disfrutar de temperatura fresco en el camping. Segundo, es al lado de una zona muy húmeda y ecológicamente interesado donde atraen muchas aves paran mientras están volando hacia Äfrica y hacia el norte de Europa.

In English:

The Mediterranean camping is a typical tourtist town in the Mediterranea coaster. The camping is famous because of its nice and quiet environment. First, the climate is comfortable because it is close to the sea and neither make too many heat. So that the clients can enjoy cool temperature in the camping. Second, it is near a humid and ecologically interested zone where attracts many bird stop while they are flying to Africa and Northen Europe.

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updated Mar 20, 2011
posted by joeshawn
Sorry, please help to proof read my spanish version - joeshawn, Mar 19, 2011

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Hi, joeshawn!

El camping Mediterráneo está en un típico pueblo turístico de la costa mediterránea. El camping es famoso por su ambiente agradable y tranquilo. Primero, el clima es agradable porque al estar cerca del mar no hace demasiado calor, así que los clientes pueden disfrutar de una temperatura fresca en el camping. Y segundo, está al lado de una zona muy húmeda y ecológicamente interesante que atrae a muchas aves, que suelen parar allí durante su vuelo hacia África y hacia el norte de Europa.

updated Mar 20, 2011
edited by cogumela
posted by cogumela
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The Mediterranean camping is a typical tourtist town in the Mediterranea coast. The camping is famous because of its nice and quiet environment. Firstly, the climate is comfortable because it is close to the sea and isn't too hot. The clients can enjoy cool temperature in the camping. Secondly, it is near a humid and ecologically interesteing zone which attracts many birds while they are flying to Africa and Northen Europe.

**when you write "neither" you must put "or" (o chocolate o café)

updated Mar 19, 2011
posted by dewclaw