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People eat healthy food because it helps stop many diseases and illnesses. Healthy foods keep your brain active.Furthermore,they aliviate stress and live for a long time.

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Answer 1

People eat healthy food because it helps to stop many diseases and illnesses. Healthy foods can keep your brain active .Furthermore,they can alleviate stress and help people live for a long time

Answer 2

People eat healthy foods because they can help prevent many diseases and illnesses. Furthermore, healthy foods can help keep the brain active, alleviate stress, and extend life expectancy.

Answer 3

People eat healthy foods because they can help prevent many diseases and illnesses. Healthy foods can also help keep the brain active, alleviate stress, and extend life expectancy.

Excellent Dog :) Great response :) - FELIZ77, Mar 17, 2011

Gracias! :) - 0066c384, Mar 17, 2011

Answer 4

what if I have to use otherwise or furthermore?

Okay. I didn't know that was a condition. Another example is below, or use AOCROC. :) - 0066c384, Mar 17, 2011