Please help with negative adverbs and the word "however"

Question

Well rarely do I see old people going to rock concerts. Because teenagers have a lot of energy, they can dance a lot,however,Old people can’t do that because they are tired they feel old They just go to rock concerts and they just listening the music.

Answer 1

Hi, Katita. Welcome to the forum.

Rarely do I see old people going to rock concerts. Because teenagers have a lot of energy, they can dance a lot; however, old people can’t do that because they are tired they feel old. They --- go to rock concerts and -- just listen to the music.

P.s. The symbols --- just mean to delete that word. Don't use those symbols in your writing.

tired and they - lorenzo9, Mar 17, 2011

Answer 2

Do they even have rock concerts anymore?

Answer 3

Thank you Soo I didn't make a lot of mistakes I am so happy U.u

You did great! Please let us know if we can be of more help in your English studies. - --Mariana--, Mar 17, 2011

Answer 4

Well....the last sentence sort of went downhill. maybe They just go to rock concerts to listen to music.