Dance intro translation question?

Question

I have to intro a dance when we are in Mexico Next week. This is what I've been working on. Can you help me? I just want to make sure that what I'm saying makes sense. It's ok with me if it is kind of simple speech. The parts of my translation that Im really not sure about are "luego se vuelve vivo" and "La baile muestra el viaje" Thanks guys! I spent forever with the SD translator trying to learn some words I didn't know, so I appreciate the help

"This is a dance called Born Again. It's all about how we have been dead and because of Jesus we have come alive again or been born again. The dance shows the journey of a man that is dead and stuck in sin then he becomes alive and free in Jesus."

"Esto es un baile llamada nacer de nuevo. Es todo sobre cómo estábamos muertos y porque de Jesús estamos vivos y estamos nacer de nuevo. La baile muestra el viaje de un hombre que está muerto y atrapado en pecado y luego se vuelve vivo y en libertad en Jesús"

Answer 1

"Es un baile llamado renacer. Tiene que ver con cómo estábamos muertos y gracias a Jesús estamos vivos y hemos renacido. El baile muestra el viaje de un hombre que está muerto y atrapado en el pecado y luego renace en libertad con Jesús"

Thanks so much for your help on this! - Courtenaymomma, Mar 6, 2011

Answer 2

Hola Courtenaymom, I am not a native but from what I see "La baile muestra el viaje" is wonderful for "the dance shows the journey"! It's very difficult to look up each word but you've persevered and hopefully others will answer your other questions and/or correct me.

Thanks, I appreciate the input! - Courtenaymomma, Mar 6, 2011