Review my spanish composition please
Durante los días de escuela, me levanto a las siete de la mañana. Mi madre me despierta todos los días. Después de despertar, me quedo en mi cama por unos minutos. Mi mañana comienza conmigo tomar una ducha caliente. Puedo usar jabón para limpiar a mí mismo. Sigo en la ducha durante unos diez minutos. Me lavo el pelo en una rutina diaria. La marca de champú que utilizo es Pantene. Para hacer que mi cabello sedoso, yo uso un acondicionador Pantene. Después de lavar el pelo, me seco con una toalla.Compartir el baño con mis hermanos es molesto. Se convierte en un problema porque a menudo me tarde a la escuela debido a la participación en el cuarto de baño. Puedo solucionar este problema por despertar más temprano que la hora habitual. Al tomar una ducha, me preparo para disfrazarse. Trato de diversos equipos de antes de saber cuál usar. Después de terminar de vestirse para arriba, miro en el espejo hasta que esté listo para salir. Antes de ir a la escuela, me afeito el bigote y la barba. Una vez que estoy vestida, me desayuno con mi familia a las 7:15 de la mañana. Para desayunar, comer huevos fritos con leche en la sala de estar. Salgo de casa a las 7: 30 a fin de llegar a la escuela a tiempo. Mis clases comienzan a partir del reloj o 8 y terminan a las 2:20 pm Después de la escuela es más, salgo con mis amigos. Al llegar a casa, tomo una ducha y se preparan para cenar con mi familia. Ceno con mi familia en el reloj de 3. Una vez que tengo mi cena, me pongo mi tarea cuatro o reloj. Al terminar la tarea, que jugar a videojuegos. Me preparo para la cama a las 10 e ir a la cama a las 10:30.
Here is the english version that I wrote first before I translated it into spanish:
During school days, I wake up at seven in the morning. My mother wakes me up everyday. After waking up, I remain in my bed for few minutes. My morning begins with me taking a warm shower. I use soap to cleanse myself. I remain in the shower for about ten minutes. I wash my hair on a daily routine. The shampoo brand I use is Pantene. To make my hair silky, I use a Pantene conditioner. After washing my hair, I dry the with a towel. Sharing the bathroom with my siblings is annoying. It becomes a problem because I often get late to school due to sharing the bathroom. I solve this problem by waking up earlier than the usual time. Upon taking a shower, I get ready to dress up. I try different outfits on before I know which one to wear. After I finish getting dressed up, I look at the mirror until I am ready to leave. Before I go to school, I shave my mustache and my beard. Once I am dressed up, I have breakfast with my family at 7:15 in the morning. For breakfast, I eat fried egg with milk in the living room. I leave my home at 7: 30 in order to get to school on time. My classes start at 8 o clock and end at 2:20 p.m. After school is over, I hang out with my friends. Upon arriving home, I take a shower and get ready to have dinner with my family. I have dinner with my family at 3 o clock. Once I have my dinner, I start my homework 4 o clock. Upon finishing homework, I play video games. I get ready for bed at 10 and go to bed at 10:30.
2 Answers
Come on man, that's the same translation that google translator gave me, please try to see where it could be wrong and then come with your real doubts.
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Come on man, that's the same translation that google translator gave me,
Good catch Dakie, I saw that too
Here is the english version that I wrote first before I translated it into spanish:
Yeah, don't even try to fool us
