I'm Pame...and I really want to know if this paragraph is ok...Can someone help me please?
It is a Christian which is called SCARS 
Eventough If You are not Christian It could still make you think about your personal lives and troubles and make us to think a possible solution.
First of all let us to begin with the characters and the description about the movie.
Scars ,which was directed by Paco del toro. He is a person who likes to make Christian movies.
He is the director to whom I spoke
SCARS, which stars Nora Salinas, is the best movie ever.
In the movie:
Clara is a 26-year-old- woman who got married with Julian. She is a long-haired,Caucasian woman.
Julian is a 28-year-old man whose wife is clara . He is a success man who works in a six-story building He has his own company
Juliancito is a 8 year-old boy who had to deal with his parents¡’s problems.He is a kid who died in consequence of the familiar violence.
A little resume They were a family that had a lot of problems some of which were domestic violence,spousal abuse,unfaithfulness. The relationship didn’t work well that one day they decided to get divorce,The house where they lived were a disaster because thet were fighting Julian in order to talk Juliancito into not going to his wife.
Julian bought several gifts to his son, so the boy was so happy because he got a beautiful,big,new and blue bycicle. One week after the boy asked his mother to help him how to ride a bycicle but his mother was so bussy that she told him :” I can`t help you now JULIANCITO “
So the boy decided to went up to upstairs alone and tried to ride his bycicle by himself.
He went up to the roof and died.
fINALLy Julian realized that he was wrong about his relationship AND try to solve his marriage.
He bought several gifts to his wife some of which were chocolates and flowers . He wanted to made up with clara but she didn’t want it. 2 months later they became Christian so Julian made up with clara and everything was perfect because they had god in their life.
3 Answers
Creo que a tu párrafo le falta cohesión y coherencia, lo que es clave para producir un texto escrito. Además faltan algunos signos de puntuación y hay mayúsculas mal puestas y otras que faltan... Don't be lazy, Pam, and try something better, I'm sure you can!
There are a lot of mistakes. Is this for school?
I don't know how you came to post this question but I answered exactly the same post today.... someone might be copying homework off someone else...
