Please can you check if it is correct?
We saw an amazing ,old,mexican movie.
It is a Christian which is called SCARS 
Eventough If You are not Christian It could still make you think about your personal lives and troubles and make us to think a possible solution.
First of all let us to begin with the characters and the description about the movie.
Scars ,which was directed by Paco del toro. He is a person who likes to make Christian movies.
SCARS, which stars Nora Salinas, is the best movie ever. In the movie_ Clara is a 26-year-old- woman who got married with Julian. She is a long-haired,Caucasian woman. Julian is a 28-year-old man whose wife is clara . He is a success man who works in a six-story building He has his own company
Juliancito is a 8 year-old boy who had to deal with his parents¡’s problems.He is a kid who died in consequence of the familiar violence.
A little resume They were a family that had a lot of problems some of which were domestic violence,spousal abuse,unfaithfulness. The relationship didn’t work well that one day they decided to get divorce,The house where they lived were a disaster because thet were fighting Julian in order to talk Juliancito into not going to his wife.
Julian bought several gifts to his son, so the boy was so happy because he got a beautiful,big,new and blue bycicle. One week after the boy asked his mother to help him how to ride a bycicle but his mother was so bussy that she told him :” I can`t help you now JULIANCITO “
So the boy decided to went up to upstairs alone and tried to ride his bycicle by himself
He went up to the roof and died.
fINALLy Julian realized that he was wrong about his relationship AND try to solve his marriage.
He bought several gifts to his wife some of which were chocolates and flowers . He wanted to made up with clara but she didn’t want it. 2 months later they became Christian so Julian made up with clara and everything was perfect because they had god in their
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Hi Katita and welcome to the forum .
You're post is quite long, but I'll give it a try. I have not seen the movie so I'm just looking at grammatical errors, and might not tell the story as it should go 
. Here are my suggestions:
Scars, which was directed by Paco del toro. He is a person who likes to make Christian movies.
SCARS, which stars Nora Salinas, is the best movie ever. In the movie Clara is a 26-year-old woman who got married to Julian. She is a long-haired, Caucasian woman. Julian is a 28-year-old man whose wife is Clara. (Although this sentence is grammatically correct, it's not necessary to your summary). He is a succesful man who works in a six-story building. He has his own company.
Juliancito is a 8-year-old boy who had to deal with his parents’ problems. He is a kid who died in consequence of domestic violence. A little resume: They were a family that had a lot of problems, some of which were domestic violence, spousal abuse, unfaithfulness. The relationship didn’t work well so one day they decided to get a divorce (or, get divorced). The house where they lived was a disaster because they were fighting Julian in order to talk him into not going (back) to his wife. Julian bought several gifts for his son, so the boy was very happy because he got a beautiful, big, new, blue bicycle. One week later the boy asked his mother to help him ride the bicycle but his mother was so busy that she told him :” I can`t help you now JULIANCITO “. So the boy decided to go up upstairs alone and tried to ride his bicycle by himself. He went up to the roof and died. Finally Julian realized that he was wrong about his relationship AND tried to save his marriage. He bought several gifts for his wife, some of which were chocolates and flowers. He wanted to make it up to Clara but she didn’t want to. Two months later they became Christian and Julian made up with Clara and everything was perfect because they had God in their life.
Hope this helps!
Saludos, Chica
