Please Read and Comment Part 2
This is the chapter 2 of the story I'm publishing on Spanish Dict. It is saved under Please Read and Comment as a question.
It is as if time has completely stopped. After moments, hours, possibly days, (time has become useless, unnecessary, and unappreciated), I have not recieved a dear answer from my dear Alexander. I can still feel his lingering touch. I can still hear him breath my name with his gorgeous Spanish accent. I can still see him, but now he is a figment of my overactive imagination; only a ghost lurking in the shadows of my mind. Now, because I have lost all hope, time is gone. I do not care what will happen to me. I only care what has happened to my Alexander. One moment, he was driving down route 750 in his red pick up truck, and the next he is a dead corspe on the side of the road. Do you know what you took from me, drunken driver? You took all that I had and all that I know... I blink away tears. It was too early to try to make sense of everything. With that thought it mind, I eased my body into my unmade bed, only to hear a phone rang. The sound rang in my ears, cutting silence like a daggar. I turned my torso, looked at my phone in perplexity, as if it was a forgein object from space.
4 Answers
To yesero- Nothing, really. I'll make sure to make some character speak Spanish or something. To amykay- Thank you for your help editing. When I write- grammar seems to leave my mind. I apologize. To my commenters, uptop- Thank you for your encourgement.
Nice, new2..., I don't know what it has to do with learning Spanish but nice nonetheless.
Very intriguing story! The only other comment/correction I would make is the second sentence up from the bottom should be "...only to hear the phone ring."
Nice writing style, keep it up!
Part 3 is coming soon!
