Can you help me phrase this sentence?

Question

I need help with grammar and sentence structure. In this case, I'm trying to say

"Some of the English speaking church members want to learn this song."

Here is my translation

"Algunos de la iglesia miembros hablando Inglés quieren aprender esta canción."

How does this sound? Are the adjectives place correctly?

As background, we have a Spanish song that some English members want to learn. This is part of an introduction to the song.

All help will be appreciated!

Answer 1

"Algunos feligreses de habla inglesa quieren aprender esta canción."

Feligrés : a person who belongs to a church.

Thank you! - 0066c384, Nov 30, 2010

Answer 2

hI dogwood, please enable your PM function, the only way to sort things out, thanks

I've enable the PM function. - 0066c384, Dec 1, 2010

thanks - 00494d19, Dec 1, 2010