Proofreading help por favor: "La estructura externa..."
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La estructura externa es un interrogatorio entre un inspector y el tendero.
El punto de vista es del protagonista, el tendero que mataron los jóvenes.
El caracterización principal del protagonista del cuento es que el tendero tenía los prejuicios hacía los jóvenes y su propio hijo. Esto contribuye al tema del cuento.
These are the three main themes to my presentation. Any help or guidance appreciated 
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updated Nov 1, 2010
posted by theredqueen
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La estructura externa es un interrogatorio entre un inspector y un tendero.
El punto de vista es del protagonista, el tendero a quien mataron los jóvenes.
La característica principal del protagonista del cuento es que el tendero tenía prejuicios contra los jóvenes y hacia su propio hijo. Esto contribuye al tema del cuento.
updated Nov 1, 2010
edited by Tonyriva
posted by Tonyriva
I appreciate your corrections like always :) The only thing I cannot change is the article 'el' in front of tendero. The story is about an inspector that cannot be seen or heard, hence the 'un' but the tendero is a specific one. Does this make sense or... - theredqueen, Nov 1, 2010
should I still change it to make it match the 'un - theredqueen, Nov 1, 2010
' in front of the inspector? Does this make sense? - theredqueen, Nov 1, 2010
it could be "el inspector"... and that way it would match, if you say "un inspector"... it sounds as if there might be other inspectors... - Tonyriva, Nov 1, 2010
it always sounds better if the articles match in the sentence - Tonyriva, Nov 1, 2010
Thanks :) I really appreciate that you take your time to help me. :) I am posting some more fragments right now. - theredqueen, Nov 1, 2010
