The worst but delicious meal experience...
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The worst but delicious meal experience I´ve ever had happened about ten years ago.
I traveled to Arizona with my daughter, and we need to take our breakfast, but it had been so hot that we decided to drunk milk shake of breakfast, later at noon we decided lunch ice cream, and the night as we not bear the heat we drunk Ice cream again; the problem that this I did always during the three months that I stayed in Arizona.
In conclusion, I ate delicious because I like the Ice cream but................. as consequence I returned to Perú with ten kilos more. So that was worst meal experience I have ever had. And last but not least (como si fuera poco) I came to my country with a tremendous decire to eat criolle food me vine a mi país con una tremeda ganas de comer comida criolla, so I continue up of weight
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The worst, but also most delicious, meal experience I´ve ever had happened about ten years ago.
I traveled to Arizona with my daughter and we needed to have breakfast but it had been so hot that we decided to have milk shakes for breakfast. Later, at noon, we decided to have ice cream for lunch. By night time, we still could not bear the heat and had ice cream again. The problem is that I continued this pattern during the three months I stayed in Arizona.
In conclusion, I ate this way because I like ice cream and as a consequence, I returned to Perú ten kilos heavier. So that was the worst meal experience I have ever had. Last but not least (como si fuera poco), I came back to my country with a tremendous desire to eat creole food (me vine a mi país con una tremeda ganas de comer comida criolla) so now I'm still gaining weight.
"Drunk" es un adjetivo (o sustantivo) que significa boracho.
The worst but most delicious meal experience I´ve ever had happened about ten years ago.
I traveled to Arizona with my daughter, and we needed to have (take our) breakfast, but it was (had been) so hot that we decided to have a milk shake for (drunk milk shake of) breakfast, later at noon we decided to have icecream for lunch (ice cream), and in the evening, (the night) as we could not bear the heat, we ate (drunk) ice cream again. The problem with this was (the problem) that I did this for the entire (always during the) three months that I stayed in Arizona.
In conclusion, it was the most (I ate) delicious because I like (the) ice cream but................. as a consequence I returned to Perú with ten extra kilos (more). So that was worst meal experience I have ever had. And last but not least (como si fuera poco) As if that weren't enough, I returned (came) to my country with a tremendous desire to eat criolle food me vine a mi país con una tremeda ganas de comer comida criolla, so I continued to gain (up of) weight.
I hope I didn't miss anything or make it too hard for you to understand 
The original text in brackets needs to be removed but I left it so that you could see where changes were needed - te deseo lo mejor!
The worst but most delicious meal experience I´ve ever had happened about ten years ago.
I traveled to Arizona with my daughter and we needed to eat our breakfast (or , have some breakfast), but it had been so hot that we decided to drink a milk shake for breakfast. Later at noon we decided to have ice cream for lunch, and that night as (or since) we could not bear the heat we ate Ice cream again. The problem is, that is what I did entirely during the three months that I stayed in Arizona.
In conclusion, I ate delicious because I like the Ice cream but................. as consequence I returned to Perú with ten kilos more. So that was worst meal experience I have ever had. And last but not least (como si fuera poco) I came to my country with a tremendous desire to eat criolle food me vine a mi país con una tremeda ganas de comer comida criolla, so I continue to gain weight.
Well my changes are hilighted to make it a bit more correct but the last paragraph throws me a little ie: "I ate delicious"?????? Otherwise a very good attempt, Espero mi español que esta bien.
PS. In the USA we use pounds instead of kilos 10 kilos = 22 pounds
The worst but most delicious meal experience I´ve ever had happened about ten years ago.
I traveled to Arizona with my daughter, and we needed to take our breakfast, but it had been so hot that we decided todrink milk shakes for breakfast. Later at noon, we decided to eat ice cream for lunch, and that night as we could not bear the heat, we drank (or ate, did you mean you drank milkshakes again, or did you eat the icecream?) ice cream again. The problem was that I did this everyday throughout the three months that I stayed in Arizona.
In conclusion, I ate delicious because I liked the Ice cream but................. as a consequence, I returned to Perú ten kilos heavier. So that was the worst meal experience I have ever had. And last but not least, (como si fuera poco = To top it off or As if that were not enough) I came home to my country with a tremendous desire to eat creole food. me vine a mi país con una tremeda ganas de comer comida criolla, so I continued to gain weight.
