Please, could you check this? thanks.
In my personal opinion, I know that this was too hard for Sonja Taylor, Amilia's mother teach and giving us an example of corage like mother, she probably need so much help of her husband and other persons, but she was a principal actor of this terrible battle. In this example teach us too the union should be between mother and her daughter because the baby fouth, fouth and fouth for survive, this was the razon her parents named her Amilia - which means resilient in Latin, a fighter and hardworking - to reflect her survival against the odds.
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Dear Mary,
This needs a lot of work, and I'm not sure what you're trying to say in certain parts, but I'll do my best. After I've re-written this, take a look at it and clear up the parts that are still questionable.....
In my personal opinion, I know that this was too hard for Sonja Taylor, Amilia's mother teach and giving us an example of corage like mother, she probably need so much help of her husband and other persons, but she was a principal actor of this terrible battle. In this example teach us too the union should be between mother and her daughter because the baby fouth, fouth and fouth for survive, this was the razon her parents named her Amilia - which means resilient in Latin, a fighter and hardworking - to reflect her survival against the odds.
In my opinion, I know that this was extremely hard for Sonja Taylor, Amilia's mother. She has shown us an example of tremendous courage, and a true picture of what it means to be a mother. No doubt she had the support of her husband and her friends, but it was she who played the principal role in directing her child's care. Thieir story also shows us the amazing bond between a mother and her daughter (I don't understand what you are trying to say about forth). Her parents named her Amilia, which means "resilient, hardworking, a fighter" in Latin, the perfect name to reflect her survival against overwhelming odds.
