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The Dolphin

The Dolphin is a story in which shows us the courage that had a dolphin called Daniel to do everything just for following his dreams. A story of a dreamer in which Daniel who is a young dolphin shows us the magic of the life. His days of Daniel passed placidly dedicating itself to fish and to surf but, he always knew that his intention was going further away that surfing and fishing. One day, he decided to abandon his herd and his island and starts an adventure looking for his dreams. He only wanted to find the proposed of his life. He took a trip but, it wasn’t to be easy, he found a lot of risks and challenges; friends and enemies but, Daniel trust in himself. Finally, he realized that the lesson of life and living is not to catch all the fish in this world, you always should have to look and treat to reach your goals and never to stop dreaming. To conclude let me tell you something, if you continue your goals, dreams and ideals everything is possible and your best wishes can became true.

Please fill in your profle, which is your native language? - 00494d19, Oct 19, 2010

Answer 1

The Dolphin

The Dolphin is a story that shows us the courage of a dolphin named Daniel doing everything to follow his dreams. It is the story of a dreamer in which Daniel, who is a young dolphin, shows us the magic of life. Daniel's life passed placidly as he dedicated himself to fishing and surfing, but he always knew that his ambition was to go further. One day, he decided to abandon his pod and his island and begin an adventure pursuing his dreams. He only wanted to find the purpose of his life. He went on a trip and it wasn’t easy. He encountered a lot of risks and challenges, friends and enemies, but Daniel always trusted in himself. Finally, he realized that the lesson of life and living is not to catch all the fish in the sea, but that you should always try to reach your goals and never stop dreaming. To conclude, let me tell you something: if you pursue your dreams, strive for your goals, and hold to your ideals, everything is possible and your dreams can come true.

A very good translation, Well done! :) I would have used the word peacefully in place of placidly. Placid is an adjective eg She was a placid dog. The word placid doesn't seem to fit naturally into this context ! - FELIZ77, Oct 19, 2010

Thank U so much! - pamech, Oct 19, 2010

Answer 2

HI Pame, are you looking for a proofreading for your English text? Please post in the correct category and use correct spelling, thanks.