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Question

Amilia Taylor, is a baby that borned just twenty' one weeks and six days.
Doctors said that she is the most premature baby on record to survive.

A team of doctors at the Baptist Children´s Hospital in Miami were at first doubtful that Amilia Taylor could live. She had borned weighting two hundred and eighty three grams, besides she had lot of dificulties to survive. Now, Amilia is thriving and she is weighting one point eight kilos.

It is previously unheard of for a baby born at less than twenty-three weeks gestation to live.

Answer 1

Amilia Taylor is a baby who was born at just twenty one weeks and six days old.

.....

at first were doubtful ... would survive

She was born weighing ..., there were numerous other difficulties that she had to overcome in order to survive.

she weighs ...

It is unheard of ...

or

It was previously unheard of ....

• although both of those sentence seem a little awkward to me, perhaps you could say something like.

Up until now it has been unheard of for a baby, born at less than twenty three weeks gestation, to survive

I hope that helps .

thanks Maria - maylegoas, Oct 18, 2010

de nada :) - Kiwi-Girl, Oct 18, 2010