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Good afternoon everyone Tuesday September 28 we went to a very nice tourist Citium called eden we had wonderful as it gave the sun shining all day lus. all of my group invite you and your family to visit the place because here you find the naturalesa and themselves.

Buen intento Charitoo, mantenga el buen trabajo :) - Kiwi-Girl, Oct 18, 2010

Answer 1

Good afternoon everyone Tuesday September 28 we went to a very nice tourist Citium called eden we had wonderful as it gave the sun shining all day lus. all of my group invite you and your family to visit the place because here you find the naturalesa and themselves.

Good afternoon everyone. Tuesday, September 28, we went to a very nice tourist site called Eden. We had wonderful weather, with the sun shining all day. All of my group invite you and your family to visit this place because here you will get to meet us and enjoy the beauty of nature.

I had to guess at what you meant.

all of my group invite you sounds a little unwieldy, perhaps something like - My group (or all of us in the group) would like to invite you ... or something like that? - Kiwi-Girl, Oct 18, 2010

I would have said "We invite you to visit us here and enjoy. . .", but I didn't want to change the original that much. - lorenzo9, Oct 19, 2010

Answer 2

Hola Charitoo, bienvenida al Foro.

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