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By this time I recieved a phone call from my aunt who lives in Polonia, I

had been working

as a secretary for 8 years. My aunt told me that I had a job interview to work in a cruise ship the next day. So, I went to the interview but I din-t expect to travel in a few days.Then I remembered how my life was before I traveled to U.S.A.Now I realized that It was totally different than now, but I can tell you

I have already traveled

before, so I wouldnt have any problem this time.

The only different thing

is

I would be doing during

this trip is working in a cruise ship and earning money.

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updated Oct 6, 2010
posted by pamech
Bienvenida al foro. Welcome to the forum. - 0074b507, Oct 6, 2010

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updated Oct 6, 2010
posted by 0074b507
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By the time I received a phone call from my aunt who lives in Polonia, I had been working as a secretary for 8 years. My aunt told me that I had a job interview about working on a cruise ship the next day. I went to the interview, but I didn't expect to be travelling in a few days.Then I remembered how my life was before I travelled to USA andI realized that It was totally different than it is now now. I can tell you that I have travelled before, so I wouldn't have any problems this time. The only thing that is different is that what I would be doing during this trip is working on a cruise ship and earning money.

Since it refers to the US, I changed the spelling of travelled/travelling to the US version. The last sentence is a little awkward and could be changed to

The only difference is that this time I would be working on a cruise ship and earning money.

updated Oct 6, 2010
edited by lorenzo9
posted by lorenzo9