how I will use Spanish in my future job (present tense)

Question

an assignment for spanish 2 in which we are supposed to say how we will use spanish in our future careers, but the teacher told us to write in present tense. pleasee proofread this for me and write your responses/corrections ! this is pretty much my first spanish paper where I'm looking up a billion words so please post what you think !! thanks!! sry if it sounds retarded :/

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spanish:

Yo soy una interiorista. Yo trabajo hacer las casas de personas hermosas. A veces yo hazco deseño exterior y paisajismo también. Me encanta trabajar con los colores y los dibujos. Yo desfruto escoger los muebles y la pintura y las decoraciónas con mis clientes. Español es mucho útil para me. Uno de mis clientes, Sofía, es puertorriqueño. Ella y yo desfrutamos poder decir su lenguaje nativo con nos. Yo trabajo con un constructor mexicano llama Felipe. El es un cuidadano americano nuevo y el habla inglés roto. Yo puedo hablar un poco de español con el. Me gusta ayudar él sentir mas cómodo y bienvenido. Deseñar es mi carrera real, pero español ayuda me mucho.

english:

I am an interior designer. I am working on making people’s houses beautiful. Sometimes I do exterior design and landscaping too. I love working with colors and patterns. I enjoy picking out furniture, paint and decorations with my customers. Spanish is very helpful to me. One of my customers, Sofia, is Puerto-Rican. She and I enjoy being able to speak some of her native language with her. I work with a Mexican constructor named Felipe. He is a new American citizen and speaks broken English. I am able to speak some Spanish with him. I like to help him feel more comfortable and welcome. Design is my real career, but Spanish helps me a lot.

Answer 1

What did I misspell ? I mean, I'm asking for corrections....... I'm sorry ? - Jaz905

This is what I am talking about

ohhh okay, I'll capitalize my I's :) Technically that would be capitalization not mispelling ;)P ...but I get your point.. was there anything wrong with the paragraph thing ? - Jaz905, Oct 4, 2010

Sry and pleasee are not words in the English language, see above. - Stadt, Oct 4, 2010

Okay, okay, I get it. It's called American internet abbreviation and adaptation. At least I wrote my paper with proper capitalization. If you're going to be so particular, the comment you posted above should have a semicolon instead of a comma. - Jaz905, Mar 23, 2011

Answer 2

HI jaz, remember this is a learning site, correct spelling is mandatory!

what did i misspell ? i mean, i'm asking for corrections....... i'm sorry ? - Jaz905, Oct 4, 2010

She means your English. Sry and pleasee are not words and you also need to capitalize and ensure your grammar is correct. Native Spanish speakers help us in our Spanish in return for us helping them in English and they need to see it used properly. - Stadt, Oct 4, 2010