Is this the correct way to say.....
gorgeous one.. my one and only.. I wish you good night ... See you in my dreams and hopefully within take my breath away, kissing distance very very soon
Preciosa una, mi uno y sólo, le deseo buenas noches ... te veo en mis sueños y espero que dentro de tomar mi respiración lejos, besando distance muy muy pronto
I don't think the text can be translated literally
2 Answers
Preciosa (o)...no need to write the one
el único para mí
You are translating word for word where Spanish has it's own constructions.
le deseo buenas noches (first, use te as you are being familiar) Spanish, however, would probable use a que tengas buenas noches or similar construction.
Parts of your last one make sense then it loses me.
The Spanish gerund can function as an adjective, but not how you are using it. (besando distancia)
Since the English sentence make no sense to me I'll leave it for someone else to decipher.
gorgeous one.. my one and only.. I wish you good night ... See you in my dreams and hopefully within take my breath away, kissing distance very very soon
= Georgeous one...my one and only ...I wish you goodnight... (I hope to ) see you in my dreams and hopefully you will take my breath away(???) and we can be within kissing distance very very soon
I am trying to make an intelligent guess as to the English as it is not completely clear in some places as Qfreed has correctly indicated so I hope that I have expressed the intention in the words as accurately as possible.
= Preciosa /o el único para mi...que tengas buenas noches y espero que te vea en mi sueños y con esperanza me dejarás boquiabierto y podemos ser bastante cerca para besar muy muy pronto. 
I hope that this helps you 
Corregid mi español, por favor
