How can I say?

Question

Dear Friends my name is Luz bravo and I speak spanish I need some help with a little text for my work.

how can I say in english:

La razón de realizar esta serie de tips y prácticos consejos para vendedores y publico en general , es por que estamos realmente interesados en compartir las claves mas importantes que nos han llevado al éxito y queremos que nuestros clientes también lo obtengan, así como a las personas que van iniciando con un negocio de joyería y no tienen mucha experiencia

¡Bienvenida Luz! Con placer nos gustaríamos ayudarle, pero ¿puedes intentarlo en inglés primero? Ayudamos a las personas con sus tareas de escuela, pero no lo hacemos nosotros. :-) - chaparrito, Jul 29, 2010

In the upper right corner of the screen , you will find the translator. just click to English:) - Brynleigh, Aug 7, 2010

Thank You very much friends! - LUZBRAVO, Aug 16, 2010

Answer 1

What a great translation Maria, well done, bien hecho - others may mention some other things but a couple of suggestions from me would be as shown below:

The reason for putting together this series of practical tips and advice for merchants and the public in general, it is because we are really interested in sharing the most important keys that have carried us to success, and we desire that our customers also obtain them, together with the persons who are beginning with a jewelry business and have little experience.

1. is because (no comma before the is and no 'it')

2. no comma before the 'and'

3. as well as persons

4. starting up

5. who have

Also I believe long sentences in Spanish are a good thing but in English we would never write a sentence this long. Perhaps you might be able to divide it into two or three sentences?

Answer 2

La razón de realizar esta serie de tips y prácticos consejos para vendedores y publico en general , es por que estamos realmente interesados en compartir las claves mas importantes que nos han llevado al éxito y queremos que nuestros clientes también lo obtengan, así como a las personas que van iniciando con un negocio de joyería y no tienen mucha experiencia

The reason for putting together this series of practical tips and advice for merchants and the public in general, it is because we are really interested in sharing the most important keys that have carried us to success, and we desire that our customers also obtain them, together with the persons who are beginning with a jewelry business and have little experience.

Answer 3

You can do it, Luz! I'll get it started...

The reason for putting together this series of practical tips and advice for merchants and the public in general...

Ahora, ¡es tu turno!

nice encouragement :) estímulo agradable :) - Kiwi-Girl, Aug 7, 2010