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Proofread video skit thing

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Basically I have to give a graduation speech. I am making it a video so I was going to add clips depicting the scene I just described. Any help is greatly appreciated! Gracias.

¡Hola! Soy Lillian y he asistido a la escuela secondaria mejor en Lake in the Hills. ¡Soy un tigre orgulloso con muy espíritu! Es loco pensar que casi estoy hecho y soy preparada graduarme. Cuando reflexiono en el tiempo a Central, sé que tuve un tiempo bueno...

Mi año primero Cuando entré la escuela secondaria, tuve miedo sobre el año.Pienso que teníamos miedo. Sin embargo, los niños mejores fueron simpatícos. New scene Senior: Voy a llenarte en la taquilla. Me: Gracias para el aviso. Senior: No es un problema. Me stuffed in locker: ¡Estoy como un parte de la escuela!

Mi año segundo El año segundo le cuesta trabajo más que el año primer. Sin embargo, nuestro equipo de fútbol americano ha ganado muchos partidos. Pienso que los aficionados le ayudan al equipo. Me (screaming, naturally): ¡VE! ¡MI ABUELA PUEDE CORRER MAS RAPIDAMENTE! ¡JUGAN COMO LAS CHICAS QUE PIENSAN QUE JUSTIN BIEBER PUEDE CANTAR! ¡QUE EMBARAZOSO!

Mi año tercero En mi año tercero, mis amigos y yo fuimos a nuestro baile de fin de curso primero. Habíamos soñado de este día por un gran porción de nuestras vidas. Yo estaba nerviosa y el baile era...interesante. Me: No sé bailar. Boy: Finja limpiar una mancha del frente de mis pantelones con su trasero. Me: ¡Qué fantastico! ¡La escuela secondaria me esta preparando por un futuro de éxito!

So far that's what I have. More to come. Yes I was trying to be funny. Haha.

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updated May 23, 2010
posted by cgleason

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Hello. I am Lillian and I have attended the best high school in Lake in the Hills. I am a proud tiger with a lot of spirit! It's crazy to think that I am almost done and I am ready to graduate. When I reflect on the time at Central, I know that I've had a good time...

My freshman year When I entered high school, I was scared about the year. I know we were all scared. However, the seniors were nice. Cuts to scene by lockers Senior: I am going to stuff you in the locker. me: Thanks for the warning. Senior: You're welcome. Me (in locker): I feel like part of the school!

My sophomore year The second year was much harder then the first. However, our football team had won many games. I know que the fans helped the team. By football field Me: GO! MY GRANDMA CAN RUN FASTER THAN THAT! YOU ALL PLAY LIKE GIRLS WHO THINK JUSTIN BIEBER CAN ACTUALLY SING!!! HOW EMBARRASSING!

My Junior Year In my third year, my friends and I went to our first prom. We had dreamed of this day a good part of our lives. I was nervous and the dance was...interesting. By dance floor Me: I don't know how to dance. My date: Pretend to clean off a stain on the front of my pants with your butt. Me: How fantastic! High school is preparing me for a successful future!

updated May 23, 2010
posted by cgleason
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An English translation of what you want to write could help give an even better translation that would match exactly what you want to say. I got confused at some parts and would love to help you out if possible. I just don't want to change what you're trying to say without meaning to!

updated May 20, 2010
posted by mcdavis99