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Help with proof reading: Estaba el verano y mis amigos

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Estaba el verano y mis amigos y yo decidimos que no quedarnos a casa verano y viajábamos a Francia en coche.

It was summer and my friends and I decided that we wouldn't stay at home that summer and we travelled to France by car.

Corrections?

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updated May 15, 2010
edited by --Mariana--
posted by IsabelTenerife09

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You have little bit of redundancy in both languages. I would say:

It was summer and my friends and I decided that we wouldn't stay at home, so we travelled to France by car.

Era el verano y mis amigos y yo decidimos no quedarnos en casa, así que nos viajamos a Francia en coche.

updated May 16, 2010
edited by 005faa61
posted by 005faa61
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Hello. some errors in both languajes:

It was summer, my friends and I decided not to stay at home in summer and traveled to France by car.

Era verano, mis amigos y yo decidimos no quedarnos en casa en verano y viajamos a Francia en coche.

Good luck

updated May 15, 2010
posted by megapyme
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I'm sure mine will need to be corrected too but "Estaba el verano y mis amigos y yo habiamos decidido que no ibamos a quedarnos en casa este verano así que viajamos a Francia en coche."

updated May 15, 2010
edited by jeezzle
posted by jeezzle