I wonderd if someone could help me please

Question

Could somebody read the below and let me know if it makes sense please.

Hola, Me llamo Sarah, soy de inglaterra, vivo en sutton. Tengo 28 años. Mi cumpleaños es el 18 de agosto. Hoy es sabado por la tarde. Usted es la primavera. Mi amiga se llama Sophie, es muy bonita. Mi prima Angela es español ella le gustan viajar. Mañana mi amigos van a volver comer sus mis tios

Answer 1

¡Bienvenidos! Welcome to Spanishdict.com!

Some notes on your posting:

Hoy es sabado por la tarde.

"Por la tarde" is used to distinguish time of day, not day of the week. Just say "Hoy es sábado."

Usted es la primavera.

This says "you are the Spring". Do you mean "it is Spring (time)"? "Es la primavera."

ella le gustan viajar.

"A ella le gusta viajar." Literally means "to her traveling is pleasing", which is why the "a" is needed. "Gusta" is singular, since it refers to traveling.

The rest is good, except a lot of punctuation errors.

Hope this helps.

Answer 2

Just an additional note, you'll want to make it "Mañana mis amigos van a volver..." so that the adjective agrees with the noun. Also, I'm not sure if they are going to return to eat with your "tios", or if they are going to eat with them again.

• If you want to say that they are going to eat with them again, you would say: "van a volver a comer con mis tios".

• If they are returning and happen to have plans to eat with your "tios", then you say: "van a volver (or regresar) y entonces van a comer con mis tios."

• If they are returning for the purpose of eating with your "tios", then: "van a volver (or regresar) para comer con mis tios".

Alternatively, if they are returning to eat your tios, you may have a serious problem on your hands haha

tíos - 0074b507, ABR 7, 2010

Ha ha very true... - Sanchezza, ABR 8, 2010

Answer 3

Hola, Me llamo Sarah, soy de inglaterra , y (and) vivo en sutton. Tengo 28 años. Mi cumpleaños es el 18 de agosto. Hoy es sabado por la tarde. Usted es la primavera( you're the spring? - this sentence has no sense). Mi amiga se llama Sophie, es muy bonita. Mi prima Angela es española ( with an a at the end - she's femenine , not masculine) . A ella le gustan viajar. Mañana mi amigos van a volver , a comer con( with) mis tios

Hola, me llamo Sarah...Hoy es sábado y estamos en primavera. A ella le gusta viajar. - RicardoP, ABR 7, 2010

Gracias Ricardo - Bunbury, ABR 7, 2010