Can somebody help me proof read these sentances?

Question

Si fuera la directora de la escuela, trataría a conocer con tantos estudiantes como sea posible. (If I were the principal of the school I would try to meet as many students as possible.)

Si fuera la directora de la escuela, invertiría en un mejor almuerzo para los estudiantes. (If I were the principal of the school I would invest in a better lunch for the students.)

Ojalá que pueda conseguir una oferta de prácticas como ingeniero de sonido. (Hopefully I can get an internship as a sound engineer.)

Si fuera la presidente, pararía la destrucción del hábitat de los animales. (If I were the presidente I would stop the destruction of animal habitats.)

You did a good job here!! I made just a few corrections :) - Benz, Mar 22, 2010

thank you! - anisestar, Mar 22, 2010

Answer 1

Si fuera la directora de la escuela, trataría de conocer tantos estudiantes como fuera posible. (If I were the principal of the school I would try to meet as many students as possible.)

Si fuera la directora de la escuela, invertiría en un mejor almuerzo para los estudiantes. (If I were the principal of the school I would invest in a better lunch for the students.)

Ojalá que pueda conseguir una oferta de prácticas como ingeniero de sonido. (Hopefully I can get an internship as a sound engineer.) In Argentina we say "pasantía"

Si fuera la presidente, pararía la destrucción del hábitat de los animales. (If I were the presidente I would stop the destruction of animal habitats.)