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Translation Exercise for Beginners: Number 14

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This is a thread specifically designed with beginners in mind. If other exercises intimidate you this one shouldn't! Keep in mind that it doesn't matter if you don't get it all right. The actual process of attempting translation, and then correcting yourself is what helps us learn!

There are three rules:

  • Don't look at other people's translations until you have made your own.
  • Do not use a translation engine. (Although you can use a dictionary)
  • Do vote for the best answers and this thread. If there is a tie, votes make a difference.


So here is our sentence for Number 14:

"Las buenas costumbres, y no la fuerza, son las columnas de las leyes; y el ejercicio de la justicia es el ejercicio de la libertad."

Simón Bolívar



Please remember to answer and then vote! This helps our thread and helps to choose a winner because if there is a word-for-word tie the answer with the most votes wins! The winner automatically recieves 20 reputation points not counting any votes he/she may have garnered. Every participant receives a vote from me as well for participating. Keep in mind that if you need some time to come up with an answer and if the thread disappears you can find it under the category: Games and Challenges. Have fun! The translation will be posted on Wendnesday.




Answer:

Good customs, not violence are the pillars of law; and the exercise of justice is the excercise of liberty.

(See my answer below for details and congratulations!)

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updated Apr 9, 2012
edited by renaerules
posted by renaerules
Hint: So far everyone's translation is a little too straight forward on one specific word. There needs to be a stronger word choice for the sentence to gain power! - renaerules, Mar 16, 2010
I believe this quote is enscribed over the entrance to the Hall of Justice at the Plaza Bolivar in Bogotá, Colombia - CalvoViejo, Mar 17, 2010
Interesting, but if violence is the proper translation, wouldn't he have used the word "violencia"? - Morethan3words, Mar 17, 2010
Originally, I went with the safer word "force" even though the word "violence" seemed to make more sense in this sentence, but then I ran the translation by my trusted native spanish speaker on the forum and she said that "violence" is appropriate here. - renaerules, Mar 17, 2010

18 Answers

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Good morals, not violence are the pillars of law; and the exercise of justice is the exercise of liberty.

updated Mar 17, 2010
edited by Yeser007
posted by Yeser007
Congratulations!!!!! You take the cake! Violence seems like such a beautiful word in this case! - renaerules, Mar 17, 2010
So simple yet so difficult! Thanks. - Yeser007, Mar 17, 2010
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Las buenas costumbres, y no la fuerza, son las columnas de las leyes; y el ejercicio de la justicia es el ejercicio de la libertad.

Good customs, and not force, are the pillars of law; and the exercise of justice is the exercise of liberty.

updated Mar 17, 2010
posted by alice_m
Excellent, Alice! Violence instead of force. - renaerules, Mar 17, 2010
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The good manners, and not the force, are the pillars of law; and the exercise of justice is the exercise of freedom.

Las buenas costumbres, y no la fuerza, son las columnas de las leyes; y el ejercicio de la justicia es el ejercicio de la libertad.

updated Mar 17, 2010
posted by Alrisaera
Good job alrisa! See my answer. - renaerules, Mar 17, 2010
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"Las buenas costumbres, y no la fuerza, son las columnas de las leyes; y el ejercicio de la justicia es el ejercicio de la libertad."

Simón Bolívar

Morality, without force, is the foundation of law; and an exercise in justice is an exercise in freedom.

OK - my changes (for better or worse):

Morality, without force, is the foundation of government; and the exercise of justice is the exercise of freedom.

Seems to me that freedom and liberty are equivalent in this case.

updated Mar 17, 2010
edited by 00d7cd75
posted by 00d7cd75
Both interpretations are excellent. You are lacking the word violence in this translation. - renaerules, Mar 17, 2010
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It's good tradition, not strength, that is a cornerstone of law, and putting justice to the test is also a trial of freedom.

updated Mar 18, 2010
edited by bomberapolaca
posted by bomberapolaca
cornerstone - nizhoni1, Mar 16, 2010
I like the play on the sentence...see my answer. - renaerules, Mar 17, 2010
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Good customs and not force are the pillars of law; and the exercise of justice is the exercise of liberty.

Edit related to the hint: Good mores and not power are the pillars of the law and the exercise of justice is the exercise of liberty.

updated Mar 17, 2010
edited by nizhoni1
posted by nizhoni1
I really like your edit nizhoni! You are lacking the key word "violence". - renaerules, Mar 17, 2010
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The good customs, not power, are the pillars of the law; and the practice of justice is the practice of liberty.

updated Mar 17, 2010
posted by scottdoherty
Very good scott....see my answer. - renaerules, Mar 17, 2010
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Good customs, not force, are the pillars of the law; and the exercise of justice is the exercise of liberty.

[OK, this one was spooky. I actually didn't have to look up many of the words. big surprise ]


Take two: I would've gone with something more like "Moral acts" rather than "Good customs," so:

Moral acts, not force, are the pillars of the law; and the exercise of justice is the exercise of liberty.

updated Mar 17, 2010
edited by CrazyDiamond
posted by CrazyDiamond
I know what you mean. - Yeser007, Mar 15, 2010
:D See my hint..... - renaerules, Mar 16, 2010
Crazy, I love them both! Your sentences would be amazing with the appropriate word "violence" in them. - renaerules, Mar 17, 2010
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Ethics and not enforcement are the hallmarks of laws; and the exercise of justice is the exercise of freedom.

updated Mar 21, 2010
posted by Rikko
Very good Rikko, although enforcement is not the word here. See my answer. - renaerules, Mar 17, 2010
Thanks, renaerules! This is a very good way to learn the dynamics of a language. - Rikko, Mar 21, 2010
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"Las buenas costumbres, y no la fuerza, son las columnas de las leyes; y el ejercicio de la justicia es el ejercicio de la libertad."

"Good customs, not enforcement, are the pillars of law; and the exercise of justice is the exercise of liberty."

updated Mar 17, 2010
edited by Morethan3words
posted by Morethan3words
Very good, although enforcement is definitly the wrong word choice. Welcome to my thread! I hope you will come back in exercise 15. - renaerules, Mar 17, 2010
yeah, I saw your hint and figured "fuerza" was where people were tripping up, so I played with it a little. Great game! - Morethan3words, Mar 17, 2010
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Good habits, and not force, are the pillars of the laws; and the exercise of justice is the exercise of liberty."

updated Mar 17, 2010
posted by tabbyj1
I'm wondering if 'pillars of the law' could be translated more as 'foundation of the law'... - tabbyj1, Mar 16, 2010
I think you are right. This is a very common phrase in English. It went through my head as well when I translated this phrase. Excellent job. See my answer. - renaerules, Mar 17, 2010
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Good customs and not force are the pillars of the legal system; and the exercise of justice is the exercise of liberty.

updated Mar 17, 2010
posted by hcjc
Excellent job Juardo! See the answer and other's comments. - renaerules, Mar 17, 2010
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Good customs, not force are the pillars of laws: and the exercise of justice is the exercise of liberty.

updated Mar 17, 2010
posted by LuPQ123
Welcome to my thread! Excellent job! See my answer and other's comments. - renaerules, Mar 17, 2010
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Good habits morals and not force are the pillars of law; and the exercise of justice is the exercise of liberty. This was difficult in that it was too obvious. Something has to be wrong.

updated Mar 17, 2010
edited by Yeser007
posted by Yeser007
:D See my hint... - renaerules, Mar 16, 2010
Yesero, good try.....not quite what I meant. - renaerules, Mar 17, 2010
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hay un errorcillo: "justucia" instead of "justicia".

updated Mar 17, 2010
posted by ismarodri_uy
Thanks for pointing out my typo! All fixed. - renaerules, Mar 14, 2010