Can someone check this for me?

Question

La mayoría de los microbiólogos gana entre $38.000 y $111.000 al año. El sueldo anual promedio de los que se desempeñan en esta profesión ronda los $64.000. Un microbiólogo puede hacer más dinero si tienen educación más alta. Algunos microbiólogos de primer nivel ganan más de $200.000 al año. Además del sueldo, muchos microbiólogos gozan de beneficios, como seguro de salud, licencia por enfermedad y aportes de jubilación. Es necesario que aprenda mucho en escuela y en universidad.

Answer 1

The majority of the microbiologists wins between 38.000 $ and 111.000 $ a year. The annual average salary of those who get out of debt in this profession is about 64.000 $. A microbiologist can do more money if they have higher education. Some microbiologists of the first level gain more than 200.000 $ a year. In addition to the salary, many microbiologists enjoy benefits, as insurance of health, license for illness and contributions of retirement. It is necessary that he learns very much in school and in university

Answer 2

i couldn't read the whole thing but one problem i think is: "$111.00 en un ano"

Teddy, is your question the phrase "al año" or the amount? Either way, it looks correct to me. Remember in most Spanish speaking countries commas (to separate thousands from hundreds, etc) are replaced by periods and decimal points - CalvoViejo, FEB 25, 2010

and decimal points are indicated with commas. - CalvoViejo, FEB 25, 2010

Answer 3

There a re few misspelling and grammatical error but the translation doesn't sound good, not for the level of professionalism that is required in this case. In Spanish is not good when you repeat the same word so many times, like Microbiólogo, you need to find the way to replace it for something else. Redundancy in Spanish is not a good thing. Choose professional, professional in this field, etc... To me it needs for elaboration....

Answer 4

The majority of microbiologists earn between $38,000-$111,000 per year. The average annual salary one can expect in the profession is around $64,000. A microbiologist can earn more with higher education. Some at the highest level may earn more than $200,000. In addition to annual salary, microbiologists earn other benefits, such as medical insurance, sick pay and retirement benefits. It is necessary that you learn much in school and university.** **I would have said es necesario apprender mucho?