Is my spanish translation right?

Question

I am sorry, that I am replying so late! I am thinking of you and the family every day, as I carry you in my heart. But it takes a while for me, to write in spanish or to translate your letters. I wish I could speak spanish perfectly.

P.s. Please correct my English.Thank you very much for your help in advance! Saludos Vivi

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Here is my try of the spanish version.

Lo siento, que respuesto tan tarde.Pensando en ti y la familia todos los días, como las llevo en mi corazon. Pero necesito mucho tiempo para escribir en español y traducir tus cartas. Deseo, podría hablar español perfectamente.

P.s. Please correct my Spanish.Thank you very much for your help in advance! Saludos Vivi

Answer 1

Here is your text revised. Please notice several words needed to be replaced. Good job thought.

Siento responder tan tarde.Estoy pensando en tí y tu familia todos los días, como los llevo en mi corazón. Pero necesito mucho tiempo para escribir en español y traducir tus cartas. Deseo, poder hablar español perfectamente.

Julu, I think you have a typo. You mean "Deseo poder..." right? Not 'podrer'. :-) - chaparrito, Feb 24, 2010

Yes Chaparrito I had a typo, thank you. :-) - juluque, Feb 24, 2010

Answer 2

Deseo, podría hablar español perfectamente.

Deseo que pueda hablar ... - Deseo poder hablar ...

Better yet, in my opinion, would be ¨Deseo algún día poder hablar ...

Answer 3

Your english doesn't need correcting it is fine and your spanish looks good also.

Yes, really? Great ! Also the sentence " as i carry you in my heart" ? Thank you ! - vivivocal, Feb 23, 2010

Ken what are you saying? Her spanish has several mistakes and some of them are severe. - juluque, Feb 24, 2010

Well I will have another look at it but please note I am only a learner myself so I will try - kenwilliams, Feb 24, 2010

learn from some of those mistakes. - kenwilliams, Feb 24, 2010

julugue I think that was a bit harsh. Please try to help without putting people down! - EJClaire, Feb 24, 2010

Answer 4

My spanish is not good enough to translate that, but I would really reccomend you use the 'translation' tab; it is usually quite accurate. Also 'replieing' is spelt 'replying'. Sorry I'm not much help, hopefully someone else can translate that for you

¡Hola! I changed "replying" and tried it by my own.Thank you for your help!P.s. Please correct my English.Thank you very much! - vivivocal, Feb 23, 2010

Thats great! :) - EJClaire, Feb 24, 2010