could you check my text out, please?

Question

1. In my opinion a friend is someone who isn't nessesary to have the same interest with me because I think that a friend is someone who respects my opinion, personality and my privacy; however this friend is someone who always is telling me the truth when he/she thinks that I wrong, in order I think that In the world is pretty difficult to meet a good friend, but if you meet a friend, care him/her, because friendship is a plant which we must often water.

   1. For example, last year I had the oportunity to meet a good lady from UK she is nice, intelligent, and sincere, someone who in my opinion can be a friend, although she lives too far from here I would like ask her over to my country which is as interesting as tourism

Answer 1

In my opinion, it isn't necessary for a friend to have the same interests as me, because I think that a friend is someone who respects my opinions, personality and privacy; however a friend is also someone who always tells me the truth when he or she thinks that I am wrong. Therefore, I think that it is pretty difficult to meet a good friend in this world, but if you do meet one, care for him or her because friendship is a plant which we must often water.

For example, last year I had the opportunity to meet a good lady from the UK. She is nice, intelligent and sincere; someone who in my opinion can be a friend, although she lives too far from here. I would like to ask her over to my country, which is very interesting to visit.

Very good. I wish that I could explain why I have made the changes I have, but I am no good at explaining these things Perhaps someone else will?

(I've sent you a PM too )

Nice job sheila - yogamamaof2, Jan 14, 2010

Answer 2

She is nice, intelligent and sincere; someone who in my opinion can be a friend, although she lives too far from here. I would like to ask her over to my country, which is very interesting to visit.

She is nice, intelligent and sincere; someone who in my opinion can be a friend.
Although she lives too far from here, I would like to ask her over to my country, which is very interesting to visit.

I think that the Although she lives too far from here was supposed to modify the request; not the friendship.

Answer 3

What would you like checked? The grammar?

Please, I need that you check it out in grammar and text. - maylegoas, Jan 14, 2010