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I´m going to start saying that I have sad when one tourist say: "I never forgot driving in Lima", because in our country we have heavy traffic. This is a big problem, What can we do about it?

In first term, I support the Mayor´s idea of buying big and modern busses instead our small combis. In second term, I think that our people need to learn a lot about this problem, so I suggest teaching to the students of the High School´s last year a driver course. In third term, I go along with people thinking about electric train, the building of a sub way is interesting. In fourth term, I advise putting up traffic signs. In fifth term, I urge to people to do the Technical Revision of Vehicles, and I´m in favor of requiring people to take a road test every time that renew their licence. By polishing their skills every few years. Finally, I recommended the driver fined for violating a traffic rule, taking away his driver´s license and send him to driver´s academy

Answer 1

I'm going to start by saying, I was saddened when a tourist said " I never forgot driving in Lima", because of the heavy traffic in our country. This is a huge problem. What can we do about it?

1. I support the Mayor's idea of acquiring larger, more modern buses instead of the smaller combis, and I agree with the idea of electric trains and subways.
2. Driver education is key in maintaining smooth traffic flow, so I suggest teaching High School students a driver's education course in their final year.
3. I suggest more traffic signage, and signaling equipment after thorough traffic engineering studies.
4. I urge people to do the Technical Revision of Vehicles
5. I'm in favor of requiring a road test with every license renewal. This will encourage drivers to review traffic laws, and evaluate driver proficiency prior to license issuance.

6. I recommend penalties and fines for violating traffic laws, revoking licenses and requiring driver's education for restoration of driving privileges.

   I the US we normally don't use firstly, secondly, unless it's only two or three items, thirdly, fourthly, and fifthly become a distraction, and not supportive of the point you are trying to make. A bulleted list for short concise line items is appropriate. I would elaborate more on each idea and write them in paragraph form. But that's too much for the scope of these forums.

   I hope this helps some, this was more difficult than I thought.

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