Please, could you help me with my project?

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Hi, my dear friends: Please, could you help me with this, is my project:

My experience in the English Language María studied English until the midle of the advance level when whe was teenager (14 years old), the new language that María learned was good and she speaked and wrote it very well, but she never haven´t practiced the English and she forgot it. After some years she was invited to travel to Fort Clayton, Canal Zone in Panamá to live there for a month as she forgot something in grammar and losting the Enlish fluency to speak, she began to speak traducing by words. Passed many years, and María has used to speak traducing, so her English spoken and written worse, then she traveled to the US for three times in a period of five months and María haave following translate word by word in English, her brothers that are American citizens told her that she spoke like "chita". So came a Germany woman to home that she didn´t speak spanish alone Germany and English and she was coming by job with me, then I thought that I need to study again my English language and I registered by a month at the ICPNA in basic 1, and your would ask me, "but María you finished Intermedie 12". Yes, but this is other history...

Answer 1

Hello Maylegos

You start off well here, so I am going to correct the first part for you :

My experience in the English Language María studied English until the midle of the advance level when whe was teenager (14 years old), the new language that María learned was good and she speaked and wrote it very well, but she never haven´t practiced the English and she forgot it

My experience in the English Language

Maria studied English until the middle of the advanced level when she was a teenager (14 years old). She spoke and wrote it very well, but she did not practice her English and so she forgot it.

I'm going to stop there, because you really need to do more work on the next part. It is very difficult to understand what you are trying to say.

It almost looks like you have just pasted the Spanish into the translator - but I'm sure you wouldn't do that?

Do some more work on it, and post it again, and I will have another look for you.

It´s true that I didn´t just past the Spanish into the translator. This is my work and sorry that I couldn´t do better, but I am learning English. - maylegoas, Dec 6, 2009

Answer 2

?tienes hermonos¿

I don´t understand the correction. - maylegoas, Dec 6, 2009