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Please, could you help me, with my project? Thank you

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A NEW DARK AGE FOR HUMANITY

INTRODUCCION

20 Years from now, our earth will be very bad, the climate is changing now, and will be worst, and it is sad because all the problem is caused for us the humans.

Cutting trees.- for example in our country, people are cutting the trees This is a great problem because the trees give us oxigen.

Plastic bags.- those aren't recyclable and they dirty our planet.

Species extinction.- Human activities are causing a massive, rapid and worldwide extinction of both plants and animal species.

CONCLUSION

The human has been devastating the Earth hisbiosphere and crippling its ecological, so now we should stop this problem caring our trees, planting two by one tree, when we cut it. teaching our people don't dirty our planet

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updated Nov 20, 2009
posted by maylegoas
No entiendo, que es lo que quieres, ¿qué tradusca al español? ó ¿qué te apoyemos en alguna campaña? - EdiOswaldo, Nov 19, 2009
Edi, si fijas en la categoría, se ve que es 'Corrección de textos'. :-) - chaparrito, Nov 19, 2009
Así es Chaparrito, - maylegoas, Nov 19, 2009

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Very nice, maylegoas! Here are some corrections. smile

20 Years from now, our earth will be in very bad shape. The climate is changing now, and will be worse, and it is sad because the problem is caused by us the humans. (or 'the problem affects us, the humans.)

Cutting trees.- For example in our country, people are cutting the trees. This is a great problem because the trees give us oxygen.

Plastic bags.- Those aren't recyclable and they dirty our planet.

Species extinction.- Human activities are causing a massive, rapid and worldwide extinction of both plants and animal species.

CONCLUSION

Humans have been devastating the Earth and its biosphere and crippling its ecology. So we should now stop this problem by caring for our trees, planting a tree or two, when we cut one down, and by teaching our people to not dirty our planet.

¡Qué sigas tu buen trabajo! .

updated Nov 20, 2009
posted by chaparrito
Thank you, sincerally I admire you and I don't know what I would do without your help. - maylegoas, Nov 19, 2009
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Twenty years from the (the climate) on the earth will be very bad.The climate is changing now and will be worse.It is sad because all of the problems caused for is (caused) by humans. (Cutting trees,plastic bags and human activities are three problems I see.) In our country people are cutting trees.This is a great problem because the trees give us oxygen.

Plastic bags aren't recyclable, and they dirty the planet.

Human activities are causing a massive, rapid, and world wide extinction of both plant and animal species.

Conclusion The human animal has been devastating the Earth's biosphere and crippling its ecology.We should/could stop this problem by caring for our trees. We should plant two for every one we cut down. We need to teach people not to dirty our planet.

How I might sharpen what you wrote a bit.

updated Nov 19, 2009
posted by nizhoni1
'...plant two for every one...' Ahhh. I was trying to figure that one out. Nice! :-) - chaparrito, Nov 19, 2009
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Hi Edi: What is it that you need help with here?

updated Nov 19, 2009
posted by 0068e2f4