I need help translating the lyrics to a song!

Question

I tried using the dictionary and the translation deal...is this an okay translation of this Justo Lamas song?

"Aunque mi vida se apague, como un mago crearé una ilusión-- Y si el cielo se oculta, no importa encontraré mi canción."

Even if my life puts itself out, like a magician I will create an illusion— And if the sky hides itself It doesn’t matter matter, I will find my song.

Answer 1

WoW man!!! That's beautiful! You even made it rhyme.

I would say that the translation is perfect.

Just put a comma after ...no importa,

Thanks! - thaibean06, Nov 18, 2009

i agree - DJ_Huero, Nov 18, 2009

Answer 2

Yes, your translation is good. I think it is a bit literal, so if I was saying it in English I might use, "And if my life comes to an end, like a magician I will create an illusion. And if the sky is hidden, I will find my song." Great job!