Can someone proof read?
I have to write this for a project and just wanted to make sure i get a good grade. 
Ben es un adolescente rico que vive en San José, California. Quiere su propio auto para su cumpleaños, pero su mundo cambia todo cuando sus padres le enviara en un viaje inesperado a El Salvador. En El Salvador Ben conoce Anabel y aprende lo que es importante en vida. En el fin Ben sabe que hay mejores cosas en la vida que su propio coche.
2 Answers
pero su mundo cambia - 'cambia' should be in the past tense.
que su propio coche - 'than to own your own car' sounds better to me.
You've done a very nice job on this! There are a few areas to clear up, but there is nothing that you have written that is incomprehensible... Areas to take a second look at: ........1."pero su mundo cambia todo" - are you saying that his world totally changed"? If so, you want the preterite of "cambiar" plus the word "totalmente" (the -ment ending is equivalent to the -ly part in English).......2. "cuando sus padres le enviara" - oops! wrong verb ending. You want the ending that would go with "ellos" in the preterite, which would be -aron....... 3. "Ben conoce Anabel" - remember that you need a "personal a" in there, right before Anabel.........4. "aprende lo que es importante en la vida" - you did a nice job of trying to use "lo que", but it might not be the best choice in this particular sentence. You might want to just use "qué" Let me explain. "Aprende lo que es importante en la vida" means "he learns the thing that is important in life." On the other hand "Aprende qué es importante en la vida" means "he learns what is important in life." I'm guessing you want the second one.
The rest looks great to me. "su propio coche" - "his own car" looks great to me in the two places where you have it.
I am a Spanish teacher and I am guessing that this is a short "chapter book" that you have read. You have done an excellent job of summarizing the main point of the book in a short paragraph.
Keep up the good work!
