Is there anything wrong with this? (see description)

Question

Kati tiene trece años. Es de Washington. Su cumpleaños es el veinticuatro de noviembre. Ella tiene pelo moreno y ojos verdes. Ella es simpática, trabajadora, y activa.A ella le gusta ir de compras, salir con las amigas, y hacer arcadas.A ella no le gusta el colegio, otoño, y perros.A ella le gusta ir al teatro.

The only thing that really jumps out at me is that "los amigas" should be "las amigas". Otherwise, I think it looks ok. - spanishstudent95, Oct 26, 2009

Answer 1

luv2laugh101:

 

I looked it over and found a spelling error. The correct spelling is "noviembre". You left out the letter "i".

As Nicole Bailey has also replied, I reviewed her comment and I agree about the missing articles and that second last sentence.

 

Bien hecho/Well done

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Procedurally, two things. I think you should have used the "Proofreading" catagory for your question. Also, for another time, be sure to include the English version so that the people doing the proofing know what you wanted to say in English and in Spanish.

 

Recuerdos/Regards,

Moe

Answer 2

You will need to correct the spelling of November, which will be easy using the dictionary or translator. Also, there are some articles missing. In the sentence describing what she does not like, there are some mistakes in the way the sentence is constructed.

These are the things that popped out at me, but there may be more. Don't be discouraged. Try again and let us see the changes you make. This is helping me also!

Answer 3

Kati tiene trece años. Es de Washington. Su cumpleaños es el veinticuatro de noviembre. Ella tiene pelo moreno y ojos verdes. Ella es simpática, trabajadora, y activa. A ella le gusta ir de compras, salir con las amigas, y hacer arcadas. A ella no le gusta el colegio, el otoño, y perros. A ella le gusta ir al teatro.