Would someone proof read for me, please?

Question

Yo soy un payaso para los niños. Me entretengo en las fiestas de cumpleaños y otros eventos especiales. Quiero aprender español para poder hablar con todo el público. Muy a menudo los niños son bilingues, pero los abuelos no lo son. Quiero que todos riendo de mis la bromas.

I am a clown for children. I entertain at birthday parties and other special events. I want to learn spanish so I can speak to everyone in the audience. Most often the children are bilingual, but the grandparents are not. I want everyone laughing at my jokes.

Answer 1

Soy un payaso para niños. Entretengo (‘me entretengo’ means I entertain myself) en las fiestas de cumpleaños y otros eventos especiales. Quiero aprender español para poder hablar con todo el público. Muy a menudo los niños son bilingües, pero los abuelos no lo son. (That’s quite perfect! ) Quiero que todos rían con mis bromas.

Thank you.....Gracias - gloriadean, Oct 8, 2009

Answer 2

This is the translation spanish dict offers me phrasYo'm a clown for children. I entertain at birthday parties and other special events. I want to learn Spanish to speak with the public. Very often children are bilingual, but grandparents are not. I want all the bromas.e laughing at my ... their was a mistake in the beggining and in the middle

Noonan1 - This is no value to Gloriadean. She has already presented the statement in both Emglish and Spanish and wants to know if one or the other or both needs any corrections. Your reply, I hope you agree, is junk. - Moe, Oct 8, 2009