Q&A"At the end our minds and souls were so relaxed ...proofreading some sentences, thanks

"At the end our minds and souls were so relaxed ...proofreading some sentences, thanks

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Hola a todos!: I'm an university student who's preparing a theme for my next spanish exam, I'm urgently looking for some tips since I've some doubt for some sentences, which are the following:

1: I'd like to write: "At the end our minds and souls were so relaxed as after a permancence in the most exclusive SPA" , my spanish version

"por fin, nuestras mentes y almas estaban relajadas como despuès de una estancia en la SPA màs exclusiva"

2: I was still tired, I must admit it, I'm a kind of sleepy person and if it were for me, I'd wake up every day at 09:30

"todavìa estuve cansada: tengo que admitirlo, soy mucho perezosa y si fuera por mì, me despiertaria a las nueve y media todos los dias!"

3: the sentence "estar mojados hasta las narices"/ being wet is correct?

4: Is there a spanish way to translate the phrase "The time went very fast?"

5: when describing the variation of the temperature, is right to write "desde los 1200 hasta los 1600 grados" ?

6: in a part of the theme is written: "en primer lugar he pensado que se trataba de algunas camas estrechas, humeda, sucia y -a lo mejor- con algunos ratones..." is it right?

7: Finally, I translated the sentence "The right place for We, lecture lovers" as "el lugar justo por nos aficionados a la lectura"

Can anyone give my an help?

muchas gracias a todos los que responderan!