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Hello everyone smile I need help translating this poem into Spanish. ¡Muchas gracias por su ayuda!

My soul is the piano, his words are the keys. Together we compose, the best of symphonies. How my soul replays his words of the day. Like a composer writing a play. I hear the music, as he strikes a key. an orchestra, is what I see. Two soul that share a common ground. a friendship they have found. What is a piano, without the player. It's like a soul, without a desire. It sits alone in the dark, waiting for someone to light a spark. A hope or a desire, waiting for someone to inspire. To play a song of the heart, a song of two souls that will never depart.

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updated Aug 26, 2009
posted by forajidakristy

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Mi alma es el piano, su palabras son las teclas del teclado. Juntos componemos [ ] las mejores sinfonías. Cómo repite mi alma su palabras del día. Como un compositorora escribiendo un obra de teatro. Al igual que un compositor escribe una obra. Oigo la música cuando toca una tecla. una orquesta, es lo que veo. Dos almas que comparten un terreno común. una amistad que han encontrado. ¿Qué es un piano [ ] sin el músico? Es como un alma [ ] sin un deseo. Se sienta solo en la oscuridad, esperando que alguien encienda una chispa. Una esperanza o un deseo, esperando a alguien para inspirar. Tocar una canción del corazón, una canción de dos almas que nunca se apartarán.

All the [ ] are supressed words.

"Huelga" is a strike, a refusal to work because of argument with the employer. You should have picked the verb, not the noun. "Jugador" is a player, but only for games and sports, not for musical instruments. "Jugar" is only used to games and sports.

The punctuation looks very strange, but being a poem, I don't want to mess much with it.

updated Aug 26, 2009
edited by lazarus1907
posted by lazarus1907
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Sorry!

My soul is the piano, his words are the keys. Together we compose, the best of symphonies. How my soul replays his words of the day. Like a composer writing a play. I hear the music, as he strikes a key. an orchestra, is what I see. Two souls that share a common ground. a friendship they have found. What is a piano, without the player. It's like a soul, without a desire. It sits alone in the dark, waiting for someone to light a spark. A hope or a desire, waiting for someone to inspire. To play a song of the heart, a song of two souls that will never depart.

Mi alma es el piano, su palabras son las teclas del teclado. Nosotros componemos juntos, las mejors sinfonías. Cómo mi alma repeticións su palabras del día. Como un compositorora escritura un obra de teatro. Al igual que un compositor escribe una obra. Oigo la música, como huelgas de una tecla. una orquesta, es lo que veo. Dos almas que comparten un terreno común. una amistad que han encontrado. ¿Qué es un piano, sin el jugador. Es como un alma, sin un deseo. Se sienta solo en la oscuridad, esperando que alguien enciende una chispa. Una esperanza o un deseo, esperando que alguien se inspire. Jugar una canción del corazón, una canción de dos almas que nunca se apartará.

updated Aug 26, 2009
posted by forajidakristy
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You forgot your translation. Post it so we can help you with it.

updated Aug 26, 2009
posted by lazarus1907