Te deje entrar a mi vida deje que tus besos rodearan mi cuerpo

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Te deje entrar a mi vida deje que tus besos rodearan mi cuerpo que tu alma con mi alma se amistaran y que mi sombra se abrasara de tu aroma.

Senti miedo de amarte temi el enamorarme y volver a ver mis lagrimas caer como gotas de sangre embarrando mi rostro mi dignidad mi poca moral ,

Deje que mi maldito corazon se arrodillara ante tu amor te di alas para volar pero no para tu nido abandonar.te vi sediento y deje de beber por tus labios humedecer.

Me llamas mentirosa mentirosa tu alma que sin piedad me juro amar respetar y ami lado siempre estar, que mas quisiera yo que este amor sea un error el no amarte no adorarte y no llorarte.

Te deje entrar a mi vida sin questionar tus heridas te cure te abrige te aloje y mira como me pagas con un jamas senti nada, con un me alejo manana,con un ya no te quiero mas nada .adios es lo mejor para que un amor ingrato insensato lleno de nada y tan vacio de todo adios quien te deja soy yo

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updated JUN 4, 2009
posted by sbc9588

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Is anybody going to tell the poor author of the post what the message says?

yes, you smile

I think this one is beyond my level. I might be able to give a word for word translation (with the help of a dictionary), but I couldn't do the prose justice.

updated JUN 4, 2009
posted by 0074b507
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hmmm, does this mean: despedida? Kiss off, sounds nice but I think it is not so nice as it looks, is it? Equivalent to a kick in the.....'?

Soldiers refer to them as "Dear John" letters. It a letter saying that "she" is ending the relationship. I believe now that we have so many women in the military that they now also have a "Dear Jane"" usage.

I would call "kiss off" an invective epithet. In more general usage than in a Dear John/Jane letter it is similar to saying "Get lost"

I don't know if any of this is on topic however, because I only had read enough of the message to get the overall tone as it was in ALL CAPS and hard to read. Is anybody going to tell the poor author of the post what the message says'

updated JUN 4, 2009
posted by 0074b507
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Is anybody going to tell the poor author of the post what the message says?

yes, you smile

updated JUN 4, 2009
posted by 00494d19
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hmmm, does this mean: despedida? Kiss off, sounds nice but I think it is not so nice as it looks, is it? Equivalent to a kick in the.....'?

Well it´s not vulgar (nor is it a euphemism for something vulgar) but it does suggest a parting (albeit with a kiss) that was intended to be final (and was not filled with regret). Possibly "Lo despedió para siempre con un beso frio (que faltaba de cariño)."

updated JUN 4, 2009
posted by samdie
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Please don't write in all capital letters. It's against the forum rules and it puts Heidita in a foul mood and then we all suffer! excaim

Next thing you know, you'll be in the dunce corner. (I do enjoy company, however) LOL

Is this a poem? Song lyrics? If it's a ""kiss off" it's a nice one.

hmmm, does this mean: despedida? Kiss off, sounds nice but I think it is not so nice as it looks, is it? Equivalent to a kick in the.....''

updated JUN 4, 2009
posted by 00494d19
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Te deje entrar a mi vida deje que tus besos rodearan mi cuerpo que tu alma con mi alma se amistaran y que mi sombra se abrasara de tu aroma.

Senti miedo de amarte temi el enamorarme y volver a ver mis lagrimas caer como gotas de sangre embarrando mi rostro mi dignidad mi poca moral ,

Deje que mi maldito corazon se arrodillara ante tu amor te di alas para volar pero no para tu nido abandonar.te vi sediento y deje de beber por tus labios humedecer.

Me llamas mentirosa mentirosa tu alma que sin piedad me juro amar respetar y ami lado siempre estar, que mas quisiera yo que este amor sea un error el no amarte no adorarte y no llorarte.

Te deje entrar a mi vida sin questionar tus heridas te cure te abrige te aloje y mira como me pagas con un jamas senti nada, con un me alejo manana,con un ya no te quiero mas nada .adios es lo mejor para que un amor ingrato insensato lleno de nada y tan vacio de todo adios quien te deja soy yo

As qfreed has mentioned, please do not post in capitals as it is considered "shouting". I have modified your post to lower case.

updated JUN 4, 2009
posted by Eddy
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Please don't write in all capital letters. It's against the forum rules and it puts Heidita in a foul mood and then we all suffer! excaim
Next thing you know, you'll be in the dunce corner. (I do enjoy company, however)

Is this a poem? Song lyrics? If it's a ""kiss off" it's a nice one.

updated JUN 4, 2009
posted by 0074b507